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The Hooper (2023)
The hooper
This Movie was not what I expected at all I think when the Director the lead actor and the writer are the same person and the story is written about them it can get you lost quickly and that's what this Movie did along with bad audio I would say l would say it felt like there was a bunch of just shooting around no real story arch makes it hard to stay in tune with the picture when that kinda stuff is going on
I did enjoy the tra nubs in the movie his part was cool and I love how y'all did what yall did with him at the end that was on point and I don't think I saw that in a movie yet
Also, I liked the fact you guys took the time to make shire you didn't see any newer cars in this Movie doing a time peace is hard with indi budgets so being able to pull that off was really nice
I would take some time and make show your Next movie is not all about you director writer actor I think this is the guys first movie so for a first movie not bad.
And make shire your audio is fix even if it's not to good audio we still need to hear it.
Kasi (2023)
Kasi is not bad for the most part
Kasi
This movie was shot nicely camera movement could have been better ( I don't think independent filmmakers understand how important moving the camera the right way to go along with the mood and what's going on in the film's scenes) sounds were really good but the story is very slow they make you wait into around 30 min mark to finely get some idea of what the movie is about I think this makes for a boring movie if we would have had something to grab us sooner movie would of be way better also
there are a few spots that were just outright off
* when she's dragging the chop-up body and somehow finds the night to through the parts so hard they almost flew out the trash can
* The whole I just drowned the girl in front of my child idk how I felt about that like with them fights kid should of look back or something
This movie only really lacks 2 things good writing and camera movement
Now there were some nice parts I like
* when you guys did the dark light in the bakery and all her people came out talking to her that was so so so dope
* Loved the audio good
* The party was a nice ad on good movement good Art a nice scene
My filmmaker advice on this one is to take some time in pre-pro production and get the story right shot list and make show your camera movement is on point these are motion pictures after all.
The SZN (2023)
Average at best
Ok I give it a 4 for a few reasons
1. There where times in the movie where you guys cut to daytime stock footage and it was clear as day it was night
2. How many days does the movie take place over it feels like it was a few days but the one lady and a few others never changed there look so that kinda loss me
3. There where a few sound bites here and there but sound was a overall 8 and it has a cool score
4. I think as a writer/director you have to learn to really use not only the dialog but things around you to really tell the story you guys didn't do that at all
5. The movie looks nice it's colorful and has a sharp image
There where some other key moments that just don't add up
we see a guy getting killed in the beginning of the movie at the office where 90% of the movie takes place but we never heard anything about the dead man did he just disappear
With all the day to night stuff going on you can't follow the story
Now there where some good acting in this movie at times but the times it's not are so over the top it's not even funny I would say watch it for yourself and be the judge.
My advice would be take some time and look at some screen writing tutorials on how you can use other things then the characters spoken words to tell your story's and have your DP look into the are behind camera movements it will help keep the viewer engaged and focus on the screen.